Re-Crafting

This morning and yesterday morning we have been learning working on this presentation about re-crafting. We had to read examples of stories that other people had written. First we had to break the story or a paragraph, Then we had to change the boring stuff and make the story better. To make the story better we had to use different language features to make it more interesting for the readers. In this presentation are the paragraphs that our class had changed with their partners.